Wow..that was beautiful! i loved it! omg that was amazing. i could see everything that i was reading.

Well described indeed, you could add more to it if you were so inclined, but it's great how it is.

Exellent choice of words hun!
u have so much talent keep it up!

love always

Natalie

It was pretty, not my favortie types to read, but i made a special thing for u ^_^ lol great job 5/5 and love the new account

Good Job! I was impressed by the efficiency of your literary devices.

So sweet so beautiful....5/5

Very impressive...good work

Very beautiful poem. lovely. 5/5