I'm sure there are things within this poem that I couldn't understand as I don't know you and your situation and that I think is really neat. I write that way some times and people ask a lot what I meant. Even if I shared a lot is between two people that no one else can see. I can kind of see that in this piece.

I have one suggestion though:
"now i know
you'll be there for me
when i need you the most
now i know you'll care for me
now that we are close"
being that this has one more line than all the other stanzas it throws the flow off a bit. I think you should shorten it to 4 lines as all the rest.

Other than that I like this poem...Nice write my friend! :)

Pretty good, keep up the flow. I'm not really a fan of repetitive parts. But still, nice job