by shelby Sep 12, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Sitting at my window, |
by Jerry Scott
Very thoughtful and well written. The last stanza is very nicely done. Keep up the good work. |
by Jerry Scott
Good Job! You express your emotions well in the words. Keep it up! |
by cLumsy
Wow... this is exactly what i do at night... thanks for reminding me that i'm not the only one... |
by Natalie84
I love this! You have to speak up or you'll always wonder what would have or could have happened had you told. Very nicely written...I love the last stanza...sitting in the light of the moon sets a romantic mode for wishing to be with your love....nice write!! :) |
Thats really good..dont we all feel that way.. keep up the good work! *5/5* |