by chris johnson Sep 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Why do we open our hearts to the pain |
Chris, ur poems r sooo good!!! usually ryhming poems arent that great, but i liked this one alot. the only thing i would say is maybe...less word repetition? i dunno though, thats being pretty picky. this poem is really great!! keep writing!!! |