Done

by Rachael   Sep 13, 2005


You always let me down
But I still come back for more,
Everytime you call
I'm right there at your door.

I've put you on a pedestal
When you deserve a stool,
I don't know how to play this game
But that there are no rules.

A fool in love is all I was
To me it makes no sense,
You attacked when I let down my guard
My heart's got no defense.

I've given to you all I can
You've left me drained and used,
The fire's out, the lights have dimmed
My love has been abused.

I said before that I was done
That I would not be your pet,
But now you've crossed the line I drew
And I will not forget.

You lie to her like you lied to me
And this I know is true,
So as you see I mean it now
When I say that we are through.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Matt

    I have to be honest, i know exactly what this is about because i have put someone through this myself, it's so hard when you don't actually know what you want and you just take someone for granted. I'm not trying to justify it because it's very wrong and i know that for myself. Fab poem, keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by tortured soul

    The emotion put into this is so clear. I have put myself through the same deal to many times. The end is sometimes the hardest thing to face. Thank You SOO much for commenting. You write with a certain style that is truly wonderful!! Always

  • 19 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    This is really good. Its really deep and I can completely understand what your going through. I hope everthing gets better for you. If it hasnt already.

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