If i go

by Amanda   Sep 13, 2005


How much I really love you,
You will never know,
Please will you forgive me,
If I decide to go?

If I lose all of my power,
If I lose my will to fight,
I want you to hold me,
And say I'll be alright,

Know that I do love you,
Know that I do care,
Even if I choose to go away,
Inside you I'll be there,

A better place is where I'll be,
Singing in the breeze,
I will sit and watch over you,
From the highest trees.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

Not going anywhere, just thought I'd say how i feel sometimes. Bit rubbish but i like to post all my thoughts anyway!

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  • 19 years ago

    by **bAbY-cAkEs**

    If writing your feelings down helps you write poems like this then keep doing it because u are an amazing poet!

  • 19 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good i liked it has a nice flow

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Rubbish...not at all. Beautiful poem as always...

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy B

    Very nice. Good thing you're not going anywhere.

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Not rubbish at all hun, I thought it was very meaningful and deep!!! Please don't go, I would miss you so much, you help me every time I'm down and I love you so so much my very special friend....Please be strong and keep your head up high.....

    *Much love Sabrina*

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