Lol i have no clue what this is about...maybe the experience of drugs? IDK i've never been high, so i wouldn't know..but damn..i thought it had to do with monkeys lol this was really good anyways, u used some HUGE words, and i had no idea what most of them meant, lol but dats cool cuz it was good! keep it up

Now this is deeeeep! WOW, kinda speechless on this one, kinda like a suffocated poetic short story,kinda sorta way...mind boggling?!? I'm going to have to give you a 5/5 on that!

Drew, you never cease to amaze me. i truely do appreciate your writing, it is so beautiful and seems to always have so much feeling and thought put into it. I would tell you that you could change things and write things in it differently but then i would be asking you to change all the things that make it as beautiful as it really is. you inspire me as a writer to take up new ways of writing my poems and putting things. thank you so much! keep up all the amazing work. Much luv~ Lynds

I think that the general category of love will suffice for the category. It flowed well but in a kind of un-understood way, perhaps it flowed too well and made the poem go too fast for understanding? The only thing that bugs me is that I can't visualise a certain image it morphs constantly into something new, I liked it and hope that you actually appreciate the criticism rather than take offence in it. It is a great poem in the end. :p

Deep and wonderfully writin you got talent keep writing..you are one the most talent peoeple i knone on this site ..with all this great work you got..wiah i could be able to do that....5/5