Great poem 5/5 take care and keep it up...always keep writing :-)

Nice poem...i ask myself that question all the time...i could have most guys at skool but when he walks by hes the only one i want...

I really like this poem cause i can relate, i'm going through it right now i mean...
ne ways,
keep writing!!!

I loved the last stanza! It worked perfectly. Good job.

I loved it i think it says a lot