I agreee with this poem compltely. it rhymed well and flowed, except the very last two lines; they just didnt sound right.

This is quite sing-songish. I like the rhythm and flow to it. I also have a poem called memories but you have written with a different perspective, which is interesting. I think this is short and sweet, it's nice to finally read some optimistic stuff!

I really like this poem and it quite true aswell love all ya poems talk to ya sometime soon xx