This is really good, i'm glad u got over u eating disorder, and i hope things are going good. i loved ur poem, but also, maybe u should try the formation i mentioned in my other comment. if you dont want to, dats cool. idk its just what i think would help me see ur poem a little more clear, as a reader. ^-^ i'm not trying to be mean! dont think i'm a bit(|-|

Wow are you in recovery sweety, I hope it all works out well for you....better than me!!! such a beautiful poem, brought some great pictures to my mind, great job hun....I'm so proud of you, be strong right!!!

*Much love Sabrina*

Fantastic poem, really inspiring! some great imagery too! but most of all, well done for getting through!

I'm so proud of you Liz, on your way to recovery. It seems like you have much more hope then you did last time. Keep praying, Jehovah will help. You may fall on the path of righteousness, but you need to get back up and keep walking on this grand path.
Stay Strong,
Christian Love,
CD

Wow thats a great poem and im glad ur recovering. Im struggling with an eating disorder right now and cant seem to get out of it. my life is falling apart. if u have any advice please email me hauntedbymydarkmemories@yahoo.com
-Sami