Beautiful rose

by Unrequited   Sep 13, 2005


Reach inside
nothing
silence is all that's left
all that remains
loneliness
the number one cause of death
reach inside
... nothing

a withered rose
slowly fading
as it tries to hold on
as long as i am here
the petals will remain

please don't fade away
I'll pray for you
everyday
... beautiful rose

reach inside me
nothing
not even silence remains
loneliness
there's no such thing
i am empty
for i gave it all to you

i reach inside you
... something
something still remains

my withered rose
one day, you will bloom again
and i will fight to the end for you
... my beautiful rose

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this poem is for a wonderful person, and a very talented poet! Everyone has very tough obstacles in their life, and we all need support when trying to overcome our troubles! So I hope you like my poem, and I also really hope that you check her poetry out as well! her name is rose, and here is her poetry link...

link to undying blusher: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=147550

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  • 19 years ago

    by nightschild

    What a beautiful poem
    very heartfelt and touching
    you are an excellent writter
    xoxoxox
    ~*mArY*~

  • 19 years ago

    by nightschild

    What a beautiful poem
    very heartfelt and touching
    you are an excellent writter
    xoxoxox
    ~*mArY*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Aww you wrote this for undying blusher, how sweet!!! she is such a great friend, for all of us unrequited ones it seems. She truely deserves this beautiful poem, and you could not have written it any better! *~*~*~*~*~*~*beautiful*~*~*~*~*

  • 19 years ago

    by Lucy

    Beautifully written, at first i was coming to read to get my stuff read in return, but this is truly how i like to see poetry written, you can feel soul and depth and so much possibility, wonderful writing there

    LeeNicole

  • 19 years ago

    by amber

    It is awesome i like it good job

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