Wow you have some really neat ideas. keep up the good work and dont stop writing! You've got great talent!lol

I really dont care for reputitious poems, but this one seemed to have a kinda rhythem to it! I'll be back to read more of your stuff!

Your creativity never ceases to amaze me, great use of repetition.

Wow that was very good. It was nice and had a nice flow to it; but one thing I would suggest, that I probably need to work on myself, is sticking to a certain amount of lines per stanza. For example, most poems have 4 lines in a stanza. Nevertheless, it was very good--5/5

Saiya

Nice job, Though I don't really like repetitive poems

Usually repetitive poems like this arn't my thing, but i liked this one. it seemed to have a rhythum that pulled you in.

Sounds like me, unfortunately, I'm Autistic though.

Big Hugs,

Michelle

This was great! I could feel passion behind each line. Great job! ^^

Heartz!