It's pretty good....just put it into lines and stanzas....keep up the good work =)

-brittnay- ((4/5))
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Hey...pretty good...i agree with silly bi+ch...you def. sould put it into stanzas and line patterns...but other then that you did pretty well....
Much Love
Tristan