That was a very great poem- full of emotion- those are the best- good job :)

Wow ! Hot girl * slaps you with her kitty whip * Excellent jb , you had my attention

Ok now I'm confused !! says male in your profile *L*

I liked it it turned me on for some reason but any way it was a great poem

That was a very good poem... =)

Wow total erotica extordinary so turned me on

This was amazing! It totally reminded me of everythng that just happend with me and my bestfriend (now girlfriend) but yea its amazing how close you hit to home!

thnx always,
Kristy~~

Wow..i wish me and my girlfriend had that chance..people dont understand gays..i admire you!!!

Wow that was really good.. i liked it heheh ^_^

Aww. great poem. xoxo

That is soooo soooo soooo well i dont know what that is

Skin on skin flesh on flesh
Whose on top? Bodies mesh

/\ thts my fave line

great job
5/5

~~Bee