by dustin Sep 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Daddy why do you always hit mommy? |
Aww great work....i feel sorry for the mommy and the child for suffering....great job 5/5 |
by Samantha
Wow... i dont even know what to say... this poem is so well written and right from the heart... i can realte to this poem... my dad still beats my mum up all the time.. and this poem is exactly how i feel.. very nice job 5/5 |
by Jerry Scott
Good Job! 5/5 |
Just want you to know that I love your poem...really sad, but good! Nice job 5/5 take care and always keep writing |
by lostdeadkid
Hey this poem is sad....but yea i like it...so l8errrrr keep righting more |