by ~~Fire Angel~~ Sep 14, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
No other man will have that voice, |
by Clown
I like it, it was good, 5/5 no problem, the reson you dont get constructive comments is cuz you dont need help with your writting. I see no faults in this poem |
by Clown
I like it, it was good, 5/5 no problem, the reson you dont get constructive comments is cuz you dont need help with your writting. I see no faults in this poem |
Love is tough and still we can't live without it....Great job, very touching poem!!! I enjoyed reading it, very well done =0) |
That was a great poem i really liked it. keep up the great work....luv and huggs....missy |
by Brian King
I like the whole no ther man thing it works well but the capital 'C' on command looks akward |