I Truly Love You

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Sep 14, 2005


It may take almost dying,
To realize what life is,
To see everyone crying,
On this mishappen night.

All I know,
Is I don't find life exciting,
And feel I need to starve.
Yet I do not want to die,
For I need to be with him.
Love takes you many places,
Tells you many things,
It beats out death,
And the will the kill.
I try my best,
Just to please him,
Say I love you,
Because you mean the world to me.
If it was not for you,
I'd be lost and gone.
I'd be no more,
Lying in a world I hate.
I owe my life to you,
And everything I do,
Baby, I'll only say this once,
I truly love you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Ok the language could use some work.. alot of words are repeated-i, i'd, you. etc. also in siome lines you ned punctuation with in the sentence- ex.
    And the will*,* the kill.

    I do not think this is your best work. and frankly i dont really like it. but it was fairly well written so i give it a 4

    x.x:Lauren

  • 19 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    The last part was simply beautiful. nothing much too say but good job!

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