As long as I have you (Rhyme)

by Goth   Sep 14, 2005


Theres a lot of talk,
About you and me,
I dont think anyone,
Will just let us be.

I love you so much,
And I just about died,
When you stood in front of me,
And just started to cry.

Its tears of joy,
That ran down your cheek,
One' for every second,
That you didnt speak.

Its never been the same,
From that moment on,
When I asked you to marry me,
And we became one.

From that day fourth,
Its plain to see,
Theres still a lot of talk,
About you and me.

I promise to love you,
For the rest of my life,
Thats the reason,
I made you my wife.

Let them talk,
And do what they do,
It doesnt matter to me,
As long as I have you.

Copyright ©2005 Wesley Hopkins

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwh, I thought this was really sweet.
    It flowed very well, and the imagery was a joy to read.
    I enjoyed the wording and rhyme scheme, it fitted perfectly.

  • 17 years ago

    by Grumpy

    I wish i never broke up with my girl. i made a big mistake. this poem was so her! .

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Wow! thats really all that i can say, wow! excellent job, well done, bravo! (all i would change, and i'm not sayin you should, is not to add a comma after every verse, let it flow whithout pause)

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    I love it. It made me smile =D And by the way. Thanks for the comment. And I don't live with my dad so it makes it all better! 5/5

    ~Shae

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is really a very a beautiful poem. Coming from your heart. Written to a true love. Your words are truely beautiful.

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