Hey that's pretty good. I liek tihs poem and the idea is cool It flowed well:)

Very sweet! lovely contribution

sammi x

Wonderful job on this one!! i love it!

Great poem i really loved it keep up the good work 5/5

Aw! that was so amazingly sweet!

It has a nice flow goth...sometimes..all we need is the one we love beside us & we couldn't worry bout the world...!

I like it, well done indeed. Your word choices fit wonderfully, and your rhyme is solid throughout. I think any girl would love for this to be about her.

I like that, its an excellent piece- short but effective and flows well. It is sort of a poem that tells a story with out meaning to if that makes any sense at all, love it,

Lenny

Aww how sad and sweet...excellent job..

Thats SOOO sweet

Its tears of joy,
That ran down your cheek,
One' for every second,
That you didnt speak.

that was my favorite stanza yay for you it was amazing

Its never been the same,
From that moment on,
When I asked you to marry me,
And we became one.

that was my least favorite because you broke your rhyme scheme

good job though 5/5 NICE

Great poem goth. I like the flow that it has as well as how you express yourself in it. keep writing...

and thanx for commenting on my poem.

Omg!!! u are like an natural born writer great job i really loved it keep up the good work 5/5

Excellent!

I absolutley heart it, it left me breathless.

Nicely done.

My favourite lines were:

"Let them talk,
And do what they do,
It doesn't matter to me,
As long as I have you."

That was super sweet. =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Awwl.. very nice poem.. i especailly liked the ending.. it had a nice food great job 5/5!

Baeutiful... i rated 5 ... wow the poem is just wow...wonderful rhyming...keep up the good work

Great work on this poem. It has a good rhyme scheme and a nice flow.

I don't usually like love poems, or rhyming poems, but I loved this poem. Although it was quite simple, you portayed your feelings beautifully. Wonderful write.

Wow, That is one of the best love poems I've read all day. Very great ryming. The funny thing is im in a relationship and at the beggening it started out the same way... Everyone was always up our a** -lol- Your wife is really lucky!!!! Dont ever let her go!
~jessica~
*aka* Thug Baby

Very nice goth... a beautiful poem like this has to come from someone with a beautiful soul... keep it up... your poems are amazing...

sammie

I like your poem, keep up the good work!