Suicide!

by Nicole   Sep 14, 2005


I wish you could have seen the tears that fled down these cheeks.
i wanted you to know how much you hurt me.i may have broken your heart but you shatter mine
everytime you say hi!I can not stay on earth anymore; for how much you hurt me so. These cheek are forever stained from these black died tears.Im sorry to my friends and family. For I never ment to hurt you.My family you fight to much and that i cant stand it. I cry in my room for hours on end about what you said mom! To my friends i stayed alive just for you and hope that you will forgive me for what im about to do! I held my head as high as i could for you Ryan for you to see these black stained cheeks and i hope one day you see how much pain you cause me! Im sorry to everyone that im about to hurt and one day i hope you\'ll all know how much it hurts!

Nicole!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    Excuse me! My poem was an expression of MY feelings! IDC about yours if you're going to simply disregard mine! Yours is the ONLY negative comment on my poem! If you have a problem with my poem, don't comment and try to make it sound like it's not good! Atleast mine friggin rhymes and has a pattern, that's more than I can say for yours!

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    Excuse me! My poem was an expression of MY feelings! IDC about yours if you're going to simply disregard mine! Yours is the ONLY negative comment on my poem! If you have a problem with my poem, don't comment and try to make it sound like it's not good! Atleast mine friggin rhymes and has a pattern, that's more than I can say for yours!

  • 19 years ago

    by Millions

    It's ok writing, but sometimes it sounds like you're mocking people. This is just be an opinion, you're a good writer, you're just writing about the right things in the wrong way. Amy

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