It's ok writing, but sometimes it sounds like you're mocking people. This is just be an opinion, you're a good writer, you're just writing about the right things in the wrong way. Amy

Excuse me! My poem was an expression of MY feelings! IDC about yours if you're going to simply disregard mine! Yours is the ONLY negative comment on my poem! If you have a problem with my poem, don't comment and try to make it sound like it's not good! Atleast mine friggin rhymes and has a pattern, that's more than I can say for yours!

Excuse me! My poem was an expression of MY feelings! IDC about yours if you're going to simply disregard mine! Yours is the ONLY negative comment on my poem! If you have a problem with my poem, don't comment and try to make it sound like it's not good! Atleast mine friggin rhymes and has a pattern, that's more than I can say for yours!