This poem is amazing...and all i see this as is a cry for help. This guy obviously doesn't appreciate the person you are and would lose probably the best thing that could hav happened to him....so don't let go for this one guy...if he doesnt care, then he's not worth ruining your life over...no matter how much you love him! I'm sorry but its true! I don't know you so tall i can say to you is not to do it! All my love...Lucy xx

WOW! that was excellent! it was so emotional and so powerful! just a brilliant write! wow.. 5/5!

It'd be a mix of both, I guess. But trust me when I say no one is worth taking your life for. No one, no matter how important they are to you. Beautifully written though. And if you need to talk ever, drop me a message, I've been there... many times...

I think its suicide, but thats only how I see it! GREAT JOB! but I would also work on the flow as Noni said

Every writer has a down. Every single one whether they deny it or not, I think every poet has contemplated suicide. But those poets who would give up so easily are the ones who never make it.

I loved it;;
murder in the form of suicide , is what it is.
i loved the flow.
and thank you for commenting on my poem and telling me about this poem,
i really can relate to it;;
keep your chin up sweetums it happens to everyone at some point;;
sad but true
5/5 hunny; i feel your pain [x]o[x]o

Loved it;
murder in the form of suicide;;
thank you for telling me about this poem, i can relate to it > heaps.
just remember to keep your chin up hunny;;
5/5 ; just remember it happens to everyone at some point ;;
sad but a very true face.
[x]o[x]o

Well I believe that it is both becuase he killed your heart but then at the same time you have control of your life and dont feel so bad I cut very badly to and for a long time I saw myself doing exactly what this poem says but trust me he isnt worth it..keep your head up high and dont go through with it and this poem is AMAZING, check out some of mine and comment please thanks

That poem was just...amazing.

This is REALLY good! keep up the AWESOME work! i was in that situiation too but i never can stab myself. it's so hard. but i'm over it

Wow im crying
thats a sad but ausume poem
there is another out there for you trust me
i have been though alot for only 21 and i am also getting married to my one in november
but ive felt like you
and love you will find is true

dnt cut anymore
live happy just to find that someone more

5/5

lana

Wow this makes me cry......i luv this poem had a awsome flow to it....soo descriptive....and u hav soo many comments i bet u u wont notice mine!!!! hahaha but still keep on writing..

Wow this makes me cry......i luv this poem had a awsome flow to it....soo descriptive....and u hav soo many comments i bet u u wont notice mine!!!! hahaha but still keep on writing..

I've read this before.. Its very good. 5/5

If you wanted to kill yourself..you would have already. and its obviously suicide. did he tell you to kill yourself? did he create the cuts on your body? did he tell you to go cut yourself? No. this is really a great poem, though. you might want to proof read first. and i'm gonna preach here for a hot second...take it for what its worth. DONT EVER LET A GUY STAND BETWEEN YOU AND LIFE. FROM LIVING. No guy is worth that. no one is. and there will come a time when you see this all being played out. take it from me...i gave up on life for a guy...the same guy many times and each and every time i had to pull myself out of the hole that i, and only i, created. and its not fun. its not fair either but thats how we live and learn. like i said, take it for what its worth. and always, ALWAYS keep writing. i can tell that that is how you vent

This a nice poem but u should really think about the people who will suffer like ur parents and your family members if you take your life away really think about it do you think he is worth your tears or even your life?

Wonderful! But I'm not sure if it's murder or suicide. But I think it's closer to being suicide then murder.
You're a very telented person.
Keep writing!
XoX
A-T.

Wow.. this was really good. i agree with noni, your flow could use some work. have you shown him the poem? he'll probably miss you, and there are tons of other people who would miss you too, so dont do whatever youre thinking of doing hun.

5/5
Allanah

That was amazing

I believe dat this is suicide...u shouldnt end ur life for no guy b-cuz they are nt worth it...just think about all the people who will suffer if u take ur life away....trust me i've felt like dis before bt i realized dat he was nt worth take my life away for so really think bout it u will find sume one better trust me its his lost nt urs