I know you wrote this a long time ago but I just read it. I'm going through something of the same thing right now but totally differnt.

Great job. . .I especially love that last stanza and that last line

laura
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You are definetely right, i did likE it!
i would love it if you continues to comment on my poemz, and i know i will do the same for yours, i wish i knew the answer to the question, but right now i don;t. 5/5
luv gabriella:)

Aww babe!!! im sure im not the only one who bawled their eyes out in that sad story. chin up huni, youve come this far bub. dont become another suicide statistic.

much love and many kisses,
bex

Excellent poem, keep writing x x x x take kare x x x

A very sad poem, i enjoyed it, i always believed that sad poems were the best and you reminded me that.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Ok that wuz freaking amazing!!! and uh idk i guess its sorta both murder and suicide..if he's the reason that ur gunna kill urslef...then um...idk but dont die i'll miss u!! (even tho i dont kno u) lol 5/5 this poem wuz amazing!!

That was absoulutely awesome i cant beleive my eyes did i just read such fine art lol
that was brillian hun good work ..
Top of the podium

1st place

Omg sooooo good

Wow......loved the poem......feelin it........and to answer ur question - its both, no doubt bout it.......i had a sis who was in love wit someone but he didnt feel the same bout her, so she ended her life......soon after, her father died of shock, her mother went into a coma and her brother actually left the counrty.........it was suicide, but like my mother says - she murdered the family......and yeah, no one is ever worth hurtin urself over.......phew, i talk a lot.......anyways, loved the poem.......keep writing, and i'll keep reading......take care :)

Murder.... i know how you feel i also have many cuts that seem not to heal but think of your mother if she found you that way what would she say? sorry that sounds kind like a poem but that's how i talk these days..

great poem btw...

Fallen~

Really awsoem
i guesse it tecnically is suiside
but morally the boy would have blamed himself for murder
but it is suiside
because if he knew he probably would have been her friend... (i hope lol)

very nice
its awsome =]

Omg this is amazing!! i rembeer readint his a few times wen u first put it up n iv already voted a few times!! i love it sooo much!!!!!!!! i wish i could write like you!!! 5/5 x 10000000000
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take care
x

Amazing. truly amazing. I hope you don't kill yourself b/c i love ur poem! i'm gonna go read your other ones now

I kno how u feel. Ive had my heart ripped out by the one i luv o many times and its hard to replace the empty space. But u hav to look at all the ppl who care about u rather than that one person who is too stupid to. I myself hav spent many nights lying awake thinking tht my life mite be better if i ended rite then. but life is more valuable than nything n u hav to realize that b4 u dop smthing stupid...

I believe that this situation is both... but please sweetie be careful.... no matter what happens nothing is worth your life bc even though you might not think he doesnt care there are alot of people who really do and by killing yourself could put blame on another people or even worse make someone else committ suicide.....there are always more fish in the sea and he is stupid to let you go.... please be strong... you can make it thorugh

xoxoxo
jess

Murder&suicide. she told him she couldnt live without him, but how was he supposed to know she meant it.

amazing poem!

Omg breath taking lol i love this poem awww i use to feel that way i hope it goes good for you

Ohh dear i am so very sorry this is how you feel it must be horrible...

Whatever you do just don't give up!!

and this is deff murder...! and love would be the killer...

GReat poem 5.5

Darlin i'm going through the VERY SAME THING! and i think that we are too precious and too good of people to submit to letting them get to us or us getting to ourselves. I've been friends with this guy for 7 years and he's done me the same as he's done you. We'll live through it...we're women...we can handle anything :) so don't fall down to a guy that doesn't know what he's missing out on because he chooses not to see it. SHOW HIM what he's missing. Find someone who will value you and what worth you are. This poem is lovely and very sad and honestly...it hits right on the spot as to what i'm going through. It's not easy, but we'll make it. Check out my work sometime :)
thank you for the enjoyable read
~*~Amber~*~