Wow.. that was so gr8.. its more than gr8.. it amazing an i can reli relate.. i hope ur OK and that u cud work it out.. i noe wat this feels like.. well, to me, this is a mixture of both murder and suicide.. its muder on the emotional side.. but suicide on the physical side ( i mean, if he reli means so much 2 u, and he did wat he did, then ud be emotionally dead or smthn (at least thats wat happens 2 me)
plz dont kill urself, find the strength in u to move on, hard as it may seem
amazing poem!!
Nannoush

A Really Moving poem. I really like it. The question is hard but the important thing to ask yourself about any question is which way does it truly feel to you? Only you can answer this question to your satisfaction. Btw Does he know what your feeling, how hes hurting. Does he truly know? If not i suggest you make it clear to him. Sorry for the Lecture lol. Great poem though, really. Hope things all work out.
Your Sincerely
A.B.Kirkman

This is a truly amazing poem. The answer to your question... is it murder or suicide? It's suicide, because he wouldn't be the one holding the knife, you would... Yes, I know EXACTLY how you feel, hun, because I have felt like that before... If you read my "Why Don't You Have a Heart?" You will see what happened to me =/ This was a very good poem, I LOVED it so much! You are such a great poet! and if you EVER need to talk to me, you can send me a private message or catch me in the chat, or you can email me too @ brandaline2004@yahoo.com Please just don't take your own life... I know that it is hard to believe, but it WILL get better... eventually... just have faith and believe that it will... Anyway, GREAT poem, keep it up, and I'm here to talk WHENEVER you need
Love always,
~BJ~

Oh my gosh, don't.. don't do that to yourself. He might not know it, and so it wouldn't be entirely his fault. He could save you, but you could save yourself too. This would be both, I would say. He would've, in a way, killed your heart as Jason Meres says, but you would be the one to take your life. Great poem..5/5. Just know that there are people who care.

Wow great poem i feel like this sometimes awesome good job.

Wow this is a great poem. I would say this was suicide.... If you want to talk to me about anything please pm me. Take care xxxx

T poem it gave me tears at first!
take care

holly

Great poem i say well i duno but keep writin but obviosly with all these comments your a really well liked so stay with us can you see how many of us like you so just chill with life and live it well it doesnt have to end this way keep it up ur great
~;'-( HD
p.s thanx for the comments :-)

Wow there is not much i can say after that i am sorry for everything your experincing i wanna let you kno that i am always here to talk to you whenever My email is posted if you wanna talk somtime... but on a happeir note that was one of the best poems on this site 10/5 if i could

Hey, that was a great poem. I had something like that happen to me to. it wasen't the same but it was very similar.

This poem is amazing, its long but very gripping, i felt quite choked reading it.
thankyou for all of your lovely comments, id like to add you aswell if you wouldnt mind.
bonnie x

Girl, I think this would be murder. I dont know the situation but i know that killing ur self is not the answer. Please Dont. You also have talent.. Keep it that way.

Murder or suicide...not even I can tell
WOW! My eyes filled with tears as I read this. I don't know what to even say! the content is great the emotion is amazing...great job!

XOXO
Kayla

Wow, this is amazing.
The flow and rhyming were both excellent, you've put a lot of emotion into this.
I'd say it was suicide... no-one is worth killing yourself over, if they don't understand how much you like tham and want to be with them then they aren't worth bothering over.

XxX Cici XxX

OK, like i just said in the previous poem comment, I prefer shorter poetry, and this was no exception, i lost myself in the middle, but that isnt your fault, i just get lazy.

So anyway i found the flow wasnt too consistant, which made it a little harder to read, but the emotions displayed were very vivid.

W00t the 100th comment! I should get a medal or something. lol jk AWESOME poem keep writing you ROCK!

♥~Anarchy~♥

I ♥ Cereal

OoPs I mean 100th vote sry the poem still rocks!!!

♥~Anarchy~♥

I ♥ Cereal

This is a lovely story, and the poem kept my attention. 5/5

I have seen many works and this ranks among the top, excellent work, and i would have to say it is murder

5/5 great poem