Omg this poem is absolutely fantastic! its so well written and has so much meaning! its so sad though.. please hold on! if your friend treats you that way he is not worth it and i know that it would be so upsetting.. but stay strong! xx

In this case, I would say suicide, but I really cannot make the judgement of this. I do not think you should take your life, nor does it make him right for ignoring you. I can understand your pain and what you're going through. Although, I'm telling you... If you kill yourself, in the end, you will be regretting it... I'm not kidding. I have attempted suicide 5 times, and everyday, I'm very thankful I'm still alive. I really didn't mean it; it was just one of my wild mood swings, that I could not handle at the moment, but eventually, as time passed, I was happy for some time or a little while, or had someone to talk to, eventually, and the hard trials passed... just, please, whatever you do; don't give up your hope... NO MATTER WHAT....

Lots of love, hugs, always,

Michelle

5/5 beautiful poem. it was so sad. girl i hope you pull through. cutting yourself feels better yes i no, i used to cut. But there are other people in the world that do care about you.

Mentally, it's murder. Physically, it's suicide. It was like a fairy tale gone wrong for me. Don't go and kill yourself now. "When you want to die, another five wants to live." Someone said that. But I forgot.

Oh right, I forgot to add this:

"She fell then to the floor
now nothing will be the same,
her last word was a whisper
I think she spelt his name.

Next day her mother came
and found her doors locked,
when she broke into her room
she was totally shocked."

Wouldn't she be in the kitchen? I got confused for a minute there. lol

This was an excellent poem. It is well written and very touching.

I would join with the others who said this was a suicide. We all have a free will to make the choices that affect our lives. Each one of us is responsible for our own life. We can't hold others accountable for failing to provide our happiness.

It sound like a suicide. That was really good. I liked it a lot.

Girlie... look... life is full of surprises... and at times you feel like you've opened every door... but honestly... there's so much more to life then you think... I know what it feels like to want to end your life... but I'm still here... and I know that tomorrow will be a better day because I am willing to try at it... you have so much more to live for then just this guy friend of yours... yea it's hard to lose the ones you keep closest... especially when it's them that want to let your relationship go... but sometimes you just have to put those people aside and not let them bother you so much... I don't know if this at all helps you... but I hope it does... the poem was great... way to express yourself... and I hope you take my words to heart... Tash

Wow sweetie it was a beautiful poem but listen--if he doesnt want to talk to you its completly his loss. and he'll realize it eventually and think of how stupid he is b/c he lost such an amazing person. you cant let him win either if thats his goal- prove him wrong. just remember to stay stong and taht even though i dont know you at all i care...i think its b/c i can relate sooo much to you.. if you ever want to talk more email me at partychic2578@hotmail.com
we can talk and get to know one another :) check some of my poems first if you have hesitations..

It'd suicide sorry to say... it's really really good but hold on I've lost so many people in my life.....not by death or a mistake....they just decided to walk out and it killls you on the inside and even sometimes on the out side which sux but it's the truth you just need to hold on you may not understand why it happened you probably didn't even do anything wrong but just remember there is always hope no matter how big or small there is always hope "You Were so close to me;But you walked away from me;and I REFUSE! to sit here and cry for you back because honestly it may hurt but if you walked away from me like that for no reason I don't want to see you walking back again because you broke me in two and I don't want to be four"

It's not over

and thx for the comment

I know exactly what your going through, just hang in. i did and now well he still ignores me but you'll find someone else even if you think you wont and you can't live without your best friend.

What is life without a friend?
Great poem... hands down.

Ooh i liked the way you expressed yourself but please think about it and all the good things you have to live for. I've been like this so i know how it feels.... I'm thinking of you :)

Hey, great poem again. I'm loving your work. I would say that this is suicide. You can be strong hun... don't let one person bring you down. I believe in you, you can make it. Keep your chin up. 5/5

~ Tina

Omg i dont know if i commented already but this poem is the best one ive read i loved it and i say its murder cuz he wouldnt talk to the girl who loved him for 16 years keep it up 5/5 deff.
love alays kayla

Great poem keep up the good work.

Emma5/5

I loved the poem! it was exellent. the rhyms were very clever and none of them seemed forced.

by the way, i think it was manslaughter. an unintensional killing

ruby

WOW this is so sad but so beautiful! it was amazingly written and you have left me extremly impressed... you are definetly being added onto my favorites list...

sammie

In this you incorporaetd how he would feel. and i think his feelings would be beyond that. it would hurt so many people! please dont hurt yourself. nothing is worth it.
but amazing poem.

Awesome poem... its really great. very emotional. i would say its both cuz he may have ingored you and got the point across that he didnt care (even if he really did) but you are the one who has the ultimate choice. but neway, this is a very powerful poem. i loved it and was very close to tears (sshhh!) but yea, i hope you will be ok!