WOW, how sad. I'm so sorry that you are going through this. I really liked the poem. I thought it was so full of emotion and that it came straight from your heart.

Well written. really good. it is murder and i love it.
tara

Wow, this poem really was amazing, it's so sad. I've felt like this for so long. I know what you're going through, but you should hang on. The world is filled with some many wonderful things. So don't just take your life because of one person.

Suicide. The boy did not intend to hurt her in that way.
there is no reason to end your life over something that will pass.

I just want to say.. because I've read some of these comments and.. well poems like this... Cutting is not the answer, and should not be the thing to "keep you alive" because truthfully.. It may not. There are better reasons to continue to live.

Bloody sad, I sincerly that never happens, that made me sad, and that is not at all easy

Aww hun, that is so sad.. Sometimes guys can be so cruel..

I can't express to you how much i really liked this poem. your choice of words sent a shiver done my spine, you really have talent! well done!
luv em

Very nice;) *thumbs up*

Wow that was so awesome i love it you are such a great writer!!!!!!!!

Wow that was beautiful, and sad at the same time... I read it over and over again and it brought tears to my eyes. Although I would say it would be suicide... 5/5 though

Well, the poem was splendid. Your flow and linking of your thoughts was beautifully done.

Now on the murder or suicide question. This would be suicide. In this poem this poor girl is killing herself with sadness. If you fear this may become your future, you need to talk to somebody. You can't let some man stand between you and your future.

5/5

I cried at the very end i can relate to this. u try to avoid ur heart ache by seeking someother place in your body with a greater pain . but that is imposible.....

Brilliant poem, very clearly written and powerfull expressions. as for the question although he cased the death it would still be suicide, he may be responsiable and may have metaphorically commited murder but he does not do the final deed.

this is a brilliant poem very powerful in the feelings it expresses. and i dont think i have ever seen a poem have so many comments lol.

5/5

Wow that was deep!!! Please dont kill yourself...suicide is not the answer. The guy isnt worth it. The flow the whole story it was great... fantastic even! 5/5

I loved this poem and can really relate to it. I think its both. It's the friends fault for turning away and he new better and since there is no reason for his actions either I think he basically pushed her off the cliff so to speak. Its also the girls fault because when it comes down to it she is the one to make that choice and she could have took another road. I like the question though.

WOW.... I don't know what to say... it's amazing 5/5 nothing less

OMFG this is the best poem i have readd andd i really dont know what to decide cuzz not physically but slowly he killed you, yett u killed yourself depending on what u want the meainng to be so like mentally he killed u and physicially you killed yourself so yeahh im silly butt yeahh this is very good i felt like so blown aaway and like almost start to cry this is so aweosme i have to put u on my favorites list

Wow this made me cry...id say its both...he murdered her soul so she just got rid of the body i guess...this is AMAZING and very very depressing...i love it. Nice work.

Wow that was a fantastic poem full of emotion it almost made me cry here if you ever want to talk love xxALLYxx
ps despite what the guy did id still say this was suicide remember hes not the only important person im sure there r loads of poeple who care
once again fantastic poem