In the end it was the girl who killed herself, so that is suicide, but it was teh boy who had killed her already deep inside. I know when I comitted suicide (obviously it didn't work) I was already so dead inside that I felt like I was an empty shell, not alive anymore, so in some respect I was already dead. I guess I would have to call this suicide with a cause, but no matter what I can't justify suicide. I have made that mistake and I am still alive, everyday regreting what I did. Please read my poems leaving me behind and Suicide through someone else's eyes, if you are seriously thinking about killing yourself, these might be helpful. Huggles and best of luck to you hun!

-Tainted Mikochan

Omg that poem was so good...i could see the images in my head...what hes doing to you is murder..but not literally..its killing you slowly..and its not right...but if you did kill yourself over that then it would technically be suicide....so i would have to say both...i loved that poem though, and thx for reading mine.
take care,
David

Very very beautiful poem, yet dark. you have a very good form of expression.

Wow..This is sad...I dont know what to say, It's very good!! But just a little advice, Please dont hurt yourself over a boy, I used too, And now i regret it. Just try and keep in there.

luv natz x0x

Wow... a very touching and sad poem. Great write! Keep writing! 5/5
This will neither murder or suicide if you look at it from a different perspective. He ended (murdered) a friendship which was unfortunate and sad, but opened up the doors to a new life that you should now realize. This new life of opportunity offers new hope and perspective. Life maybe grey now, but soon the clouds will clear and the sun will shine. If you give up (then it's like suicide) on this opportunity, then it's your own fate you're sealing. Life have a lot more to offer then it did in the past. Treasure the moments and move on. I'm sure that years down the road, you'll look back and it was only a small chapter of your life, but a great talent you found. Sorry this is so long of a comment.

This is a great poem... hang on in there. i know how it feels to be at the end of your rope, you may think u cant make it, but you can!!!!!!

.... I am so speechless=| that was so amazing... the dark emotion in it... brings me to tears. It was written so perfectly! And though it is long... I didnt count a second... I felt so sucked into the story it was amazing! I am so... blown away by this! The sadness … u feel it so strong while reading this, only a well written poet can take its readers into the story, and make them see so perfectly! This has to be one of my favorite poems that I have ever read, I defiantly want to remember this one, cause its… just amazing! I was so sucked into the poem… I didnt noticed any minor faults in it (Like spelling, Commas, Periods Ect) because… I couldnt focus on anything except the story it was telling! I give u as many thumbs up as possible, this is amazing! I would give u more then a 5/5! Amazing Talent! Amazing Job! And if u want to know my opinion on murder or suicide… technically its suicide… because the guy did not kill the girl… BUT… he is truly heartless for doing something like that to… anyone! I would feel like he did kill me in a sense. Amazing Poem=D

~Megan~

OMG...thats unbelievably well written and very touching. Im sorry someone has treated you like this and I hope he comes to his senses and realize that he has such a valuable friend. Just give it some time and hopefully you won't have to resort to doing something that horrible.

Keep your head up...you're a great writer and you're now one of my favs.

Murder or Suicide? I would consider it suicide simply because you would be the one taking your life. He didnt hold the knife to your throat. You were the one who, in the end, chose death over life.

good poem, though. Kinda lengthy but I really liked it

This poem is really good def a 5 I think it would be a bit of both but is it really worth it there is plenty more fish in the sea just think of what you would be leaving behind try and keep your chin up take care hun sarah x
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Wow, i'd really say it was both, there's a good flow to it and really touching. 5/5

This is how I feel about one of my guy friends that moved to NM he was my first like everything and now we dont talk
awsome write

There was some parts where the flow hit a rock but got right back on track
A couple of the rhymes seemed forced but over all great poem

Wow ..i can so relate to this poem..made me feel like i was there wit you feelin the pain if that guy who ahad broke your heart..but still a really wonderfull it is .5/5

Hey! that was excellent! I felt like I was almost apart of that poem. whether it be a good thing or bad thing! but all in all i enjoyed it very much!!!!

~eddy~

This poem is absolutely beautiful. its full of emotions and really captures everything the girl is feeling. great job! and as for you question, to me, itd be murder. Stay strong..always remember there is someone out there who cares & theres no one worth taking your life for. great poem though. 5/5*

This poem is absolutely beautiful. it is full of emotions and really captures what the girl is feeling. as for your question, to me, its murder. stay strong..always remember there is someone out there who cares and no one is worth taking your life for. amazing poem though. 5/5*

Hmm..sorry about the two comments..i know there pretty much both the same but im stupid & thought the first one didnt go through..lol. sorry about that.

I see it as suicide.

I liked the poem.

Wow this is exactly what happened to me.. it was just over a year and a half till he finaly started talkin to me again . ive known him my whole life.. and he knew what was comming i guess... i love the poem tho its great!