Awesome poem. Wow! That was really great, I will certainly be taking a look at your others. Great write . . better read! The rhymes were excellent, and there was great meaning behind the story. A story in a poem - great idea.

Peace. [Sole]

This is ok. im not into this type of poem. its ok though. you have great rhyme and i like this line:
A single tear escaped her eye
followed by a million more

I guess 185 people can't be wrong, this poem is amazing. 5/5

Wow, Thats so sad. Im sorry to hear about that too. I hope things start to get better.

But this was a great poem, Had so much emotion within in, And the flow was good. Overall it was fantastic! 5/5 Keep it up =]

Ooh And In a way I think It's Murder, But then again It's Suicide. It's not worth killing yourself over someone who didn't care, Ya know what I mean?
But anywho, Thats just my opinion.

Emotionally murder, physically suicide. I know how things like this can touch the heart so deeply, that you may feel scarred forever, but please don't ever think of this as a resort to your problems. I really hope things get better soon and you stay strong like you should. The poem was excellent and so was the emotional flow that touched my heart. It would be a shame if your talent went to waste hun! Keep it up! 5/5

This piece was filled with so mcuh emotion. Your anwser, id most probaly say both. I thought this piece was really emotional and deep. and sad of coarse. the flow was thrown off at time but this piece of writing is jsut amazing. Kat

Gr8 poem, so emotional.But if the cuts go 2 deep then hes won, be a fighter and show u can win and the only way is 2 liv strong cuz there r ppl that care even if it dont seem like it.

x Leanne x

OMFG this poem is so amazing, i loved it :) the writting is flawless :) to answer your question it's definatly both, btw this poem almost made me cry lol :) keep it up :) 5/5

~StefQ

Haunting poem, but remember that somebody can crush your heart but they could never take your soul and spirit. That's where you'll be no matter what happens.

Wow what a brill piece this is. it gave me goose bumps from head to toe.
i'm really not sure myself weather its murder or suiside.
i really hope you're ok and i know how you feel. sometime i have silly thoughts about doin things to myself and i've even tried over a serten person. but at the end of the day he wasnt worth it. dont harm yourself because heis the one losing out hun not you and he will relise one day.
i am more than sure that you are special to many people in your life, and that they would all be lost without you. hold your head up hight you'll get there one day with or without this boy it's hard but it does get a hell of alot easier.

(sorry about my spelling) gemma parkes (gemowa) 20 in cheshire

my heart an love goes out to you babe you've got an amazing writing talent

xoxoxoxox

10/10

Amazing job! I agree with what some of the other members are saying in society it would be considered suicide but ito you he acts he committed basically killed you.. so im not so sure.. Very well written and thought provoking. I hope that everything works out for you! Also I apologize for not getting to you're request for comments sooner due to computer difficulties sorry! once again awesome write.

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A very sad write. It could be taken either way, but i'd say she was already murdered inside and then she just commited sucide with the rest of what was left of her

Hunnie its definatly not murder... although he has hurt you, its not his fault. It's your decision of what to do.. to end it or to be strong and overcome it. I know its hard.. but the choice is up to you, and you alone.
I hope you feel better hun

Yeah, amazing doll. Wow, the ending was awesome. 5.5

Wow,, excellent poem nice flow.. i think it would definitly be called suicide just because someone hurts you doesnt make them responsible for your life.5/5

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Wow,, excellent poem nice flow.. i think it would definitly be called suicide just because someone hurts you doesnt make them responsible for your life.5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Wow,, excellent poem nice flow.. i think it would definitly be called suicide just because someone hurts you doesnt make them responsible for your life.5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

I don't know what it would be, murder or suicide. I think you shouldn't die for this, please hold on.

Your poem is amazing, I like the whole story, and the question of murder of suicide is very interesting.

Keep writing.

Great job. 5/5

I think it's suicide. He didn't know she was going to go to extremes and kill herself because he decided not to call her. It's a bit silly, and talking can help if you ask me but hey, what do I know...
Suicide poems are all too common, having said that you did well to tell the story in this, and it was touching.

This poem is amazing...and all i see this as is a cry for help. This guy obviously doesn't appreciate the person you are and would lose probably the best thing that could hav happened to him....so don't let go for this one guy...if he doesnt care, then he's not worth ruining your life over...no matter how much you love him! I'm sorry but its true! I don't know you so tall i can say to you is not to do it! All my love...Lucy xx