by neens Sep 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The blood pours from my chest |
by calvin
WOW a little gory i would say nice but nice might not be the right word. |
by þŗ℮††ỵ ġįŗłş мåk℮ ġŗåv℮ş. ♥ ××
Ah wow...you should keep writing, this one was great. so full of emotion and it really does show how you feel, very well...take care x |
by Lu
Nice first poem , you express such feelings of sadness . Thank you so much for the comment on my poem . I hope your sis does read it and it helps her to understand . |