by Naima Sep 14, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
I'm here |
Oh My God!! This is such a great poem!! I really enjoyed reading this, it had a great flow. Great vocab usage. And the rhyming was excellent!! Short but amazing... I think you should of used punctuation thought. Still an excellent read, keep it up! xx |
by blueknight
Another Great poem a dark one with such a great flow here!!! You are great in darkness and sad poems just keep it up |
by Darien
You've gotten alot better :) |
by amelia
Its beautifulll... one of the best poems on the site.... !!! can u pls comment on my poem "murder or suicide" ? |
by Andrea
Wow. its so amazing i cant describe. the words you used where perfect. great work |