Wow, Short, but damn... That was certainly something. Wordplay was excelent, emtion was great and overall it one great piece. Great work ^_^x

Wow. its so amazing i cant describe. the words you used where perfect. great work

Its beautifulll... one of the best poems on the site.... !!! can u pls comment on my poem "murder or suicide" ?
love
amy

You've gotten alot better :)
keep it up

Another Great poem a dark one with such a great flow here!!! You are great in darkness and sad poems just keep it up

Gene Ross

Oh My God!! This is such a great poem!! I really enjoyed reading this, it had a great flow. Great vocab usage. And the rhyming was excellent!! Short but amazing... I think you should of used punctuation thought. Still an excellent read, keep it up! xx