"We wonder why were not like them"
it should be "we're"

"You see its all a lie"
it should be "it's"

In any case, this poem was pretty good. You got the message across, and I suppose that in this type of poem that is all that really matters. I think that if you were to try to improve this poem, however, you could do so by trying to consolidate the number of syllables per line in order to create a more definite rhythm. The rhyming worked out pretty well most of the time, it seemed to be very natural.

Very good topic to write about. alothough you could have made it a little better. some of the rhymes seemed forced and it was hard to keep a steady flow. anyways im givin you a 4/5

I absolutley agree. People must fight the urges to be someone they're not, for it could only harm themself.

My favourite lines are:

"But that girl who wants to be just like them,
Will do anything even if it means throwing her food up again."

The second line is a bit long, but I like the message it's giving.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Great poem! Really gets the message across very well :) Oh and thanks for the comments you left on my newest poems. I know it was a little while ago but I only just realised you left a comment :) Lol
Take care and keep up the great work,
Rachelxx