by N J Thornton Sep 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Collapsing into an eternal pit of |
by Natalie
Good job! And yeah it did sound a bit confusing, But when i re-read it, Theres little sections in there that mean different things, I think. Well to me they did. Anywho, 5/5 I really liked this poem! |
by Sondos
You have True talent |
by Little Dot
Great work, this poem was so well written. Amazing job once again. |
Great poem, took two reads thought to understand fully, but i love the concept of it and its very well written |
by aaron c s
I liked the message. mthe flow was kinda off and it didnt all fit together but it all made sense. |