Comments : Collection of Dust

  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Lol, i saw this posted in that thread that bob made, and i must say, i think it was all worth the submission for everyone else to see. Well done, slam. :)

    //Ari\\

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Hey Jacklyn,

    This is deffinatley that "spark" of a piece i've needed to read. And quite true i might add. I guess most can relate - I in the fact i waste my time daydreaming when i could be at least writing - regardless of my talent or not.

    Nicely put sweetie,
    Luv,
    -Kalah.

  • 19 years ago

    by JJ

    Inspiring and beautiful. you did an outstanding job on this piece. As always, your work captures my attention and keeps me coming back to read more. Never stop writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Ooooh, I like this! It really makes me want to log of this computer and get to writing! I often ponder the thing's I could've written when inspiration strikes and I ignore it.....This poem personifies that! Great job~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I tried to write something like this in my poem, scribe scribble unwritten. To write the unwritten poem would be a challenge indeed.

  • 18 years ago

    by Spirit

    Nice Jod, my First time here but your a better poet