Wow very strong poem here... love the last part
"just take a look around
realize I'm not there
and not matter how many time you look
I will never be there"
great job hun keep it up...

I like ur poem is ur dad really like dat? if so im sorri but atleast u have a dad my dad died a year ago ~*~

Oh my god.. i love it.. its soo unbelievably cool... i know what you mean about them forgeting you and short answers.. my dad does it to me all of the time.. i hate him and would prefer never to see him again....
awesome poem.. lovein it

Well,i feel kinda the same about my dad... but his family is very nice (pretty much the opposite of him) its like my dad has no background,and whenever i call him a hyppocrite he says hes not.

U go girl! i luv it its so gd. reminds me of ma fave bnd ! keep it cumin

I feel with you, great poem though

This is a really, really good poem!! you are very talented so keep it up!! and hang in there!! thank you so much for commenting on my poem

*!haley!*

Aww hun, im so sorry your dad hasn't been implicated in your life. but awesome poem!!! keep it up. thanks for the comment, it really means a lot :D
-xXx-

Awwz hun, I can see a lot of your poems are about your dad, you have a lot of emotions right now, this was beautifull hun keep it up :)

Sorry 'bout your dad, but good poem!

-Taylor

Hey, yeah about this poem.....yeah i know you probably think i am idiot for saying this but......have you ever talked to your dad about the things that you want in your life and wat you think is good for your life.......i mean if ya need someone to talk to just email me!! good poem
amanda

Really good, sorry 2 hear tho, i dont like sayin an upsettin poem is really good bcoz they usually mean sumthin, but u rote it really well and i luvd it

That is once again good and sad. I love the message you send accross. the Everything You Said poem of mine that reminded you of your dad, was written to mine:(
i'm sorry you feel this way, i know it isn't great.
take care hun x x x

Wow... this is good ...i like ur poems