by Katlynn Sep 14, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The storm is forming off my eyes. |
by Jamie
Okay this one was better because you only attempted to rhyme a few times....this one is my favorite out of all of them its WONDERFUL to see happy poems!! |
Interesting plot, but the flow was alittle difficult to follow |
by Andrea
Alot of the lines didnt make much sense to me. |
by Jason Meres
Subtle brilliance, I love the concept. Well done. |
Its amanda and i am just stopping by to say i love you hunny |