by Spitfire
I love that |
by Spitfire
Almost made it *** |
Has some real emotion to it.. its well written, could try and use some stanzas to make it more easy to read and not loose interest to some here.. lol but aside from everything its a very beautiful piece of work well done 5/5 |
by Michelle
I sometimes feel the same way....but, hey, we need each other to help one another, not stumble...ya know?? I will be here, if you want me to listen. I know it will be hard for you to trust me with all the sh** people put us through... **Hugs** girl..... good poem, very well expressed... and understandible in many ways. |
by chris
I have felt that way many times but it takes courage and strength to survive and i know that you have both. please stick around for the wonderful life i know you can have |
by Rachele
I don't think you're insane. I do the same thing. I love this poem though. It flows really nice. You're a good writer. Thanks for the comment on mine! |
I feel the same way right now and i was looking for a poem to see that someone could relate. Your poem express exactly how i feel. Great feeling involved in your writng. i love it. keep up the good work. |
by CE
4/5 It was good, and you really need to see somebody if you are a cutter |