Oh hun, dont ever give up on hope. And i hope u get better. ^^

Hey nice job i am sure many of us feel that same way keep your head up you make it 5.5

This is a very nice poem, But you left alot of details out, I would work on putting more detail in it . Still very nice!

Great ryme and rythem your flow is awsome

i can totaly relate with this poem
great job 5/5

God poem, suicide seems to be a really popular thing, but anyways i'd give it a 4/5

This is a bold dark poem filled with honest emotion

The third stanza really thew things off a little...but it had alot of emotions put into it, and i really like it.

Great job i give you a 5

Very good it had a nice rythm and flow going 5/5

I think i would remove the repeat , and for some reason im thinking this line is to long..."You just don't understand what its about"...but you did get your point across! 4/4

Its ok,.,i think could be better,,but i know my work is not all that great ..i give you 5/5

This life its just to hard to live,
I just want to go,
I have a life to give,
Please tell me its so.
I think you should re-write this, it seems a bit...I can't explain it.
this seems more like a song, really. 4/5. not bad.

Sounds great..... The poem was excellent. Very imaginative and gave me something to think about at the end.

I loved the repetition....very good....though still some rhyming seemed a bit forced like yet and net....but im probly jsut beeing really picky lol 5/5

Wow this is really good. It sounds like something that i would write. 5/5 Loved it!

I tried to leave a comment for your poem "Bye.." but it wouldn't let me. It was also very good! I voted a 5.

Becky
xoxo

Really nice poem so unique you have nice topics to write about and the way you express yourself is amazing i love it nice job!