by ¤|Æ’lοÑεηζîά|¤ Sep 14, 2005
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Looking up at the sky |
This is really cute...i think i read it already though....lol |
by Mel
Well done here!!! a great poem.. (thank you for commenting on my work) and *pat pat* again for this poem.. Lurve n stoof |
This was very beautifully done but there were a few places where the rhyming seemed just a little bit forced...4/5 |
by Cheyanne
Yay, I like this poem! It's so beautiful and positive. Loved the visual imagery you used. =) |
by Rachel
Wow this poem was beutiful!!! i loved the way your words flowed. 5/5 (thanks for commentin on mine!)~Rach |