Wow this poem was beutiful!!! i loved the way your words flowed. 5/5 (thanks for commentin on mine!)~Rach

Yay, I like this poem! It's so beautiful and positive. Loved the visual imagery you used. =)

take care,
Cheyanne

This was very beautifully done but there were a few places where the rhyming seemed just a little bit forced...4/5

Well done here!!! a great poem.. (thank you for commenting on my work) and *pat pat* again for this poem.. Lurve n stoof

This is really cute...i think i read it already though....lol