Ann, it's so heart touching and so well written! :-*
5/5, take care, always believe in love, amit

I can so relate to this. Such a hard thing to go through..realizing you can't be with the one you love. Beautiful poem which is the normal for you. It has a great flow to it and a message that personally touched me. Brava!

Ann,
This poem not only shows the love you have for the person but also shows what a terrific friend you are!! To let someone still live in your heart although love relationship could never happen is amazing to see! Your a great person Ann and a great poet!
~Chelsey~

That was beautiful! loved it! 5/5! come comment on some of mine sometime. take care,

Such beautiful words. Its strange how things turn out in life...... God works in mysterious ways. Beautiful and heartfelt.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Ann,
i can't even to explain how this was absolutely beautiful write, and i know this from the pure heart you've. beautiful penned!

"the heart is sometimes wiser than the intellect."

wishing you & your have a wonderful day, take care. hugs! bert.

Ann,

Wow, this was such a toucning and such a lovely write. To be so in love.
The 8th Stanza was the one that blew me away: -

"I live you still today
More then words can say
You truly touched my heart
In an unbelieveable way."

I read the poem 3 times already and still want to go back and read it again!

Warm regards,

Steve

I really love this poem.It flows so well and the rhyme scheme works very well.But mainly I can relate to this because I'm in such a similiar situation and this echos my own sentiments.The sadness and knowing what could have been......This really touched me.Really a great piece that says so much to those with the tragic, romantic hearts......

3/5, aint as good as it could be from someone your age but it's alright x x

Beautiful and touching. something i too can relate to in a way.

:)

Loved this poem! Keep up the good work and in the meantime please read/rate/comment on my own poetry!

That is a good poem and i enjoyed reading it.

Wow Girl...Thas Some MeaningFul Shit!!! Damn...That Almost Made Me Cry...I Kinda Relate To It...ButYea...Hit Me Back Sometime...!!!

~MoRgAn~

Wow... the only thing i can say is.. incredible... 5/5... niice.. i can realte this a lot to my feeling ,because recently i just feel the same.. about somebody i like. but it is just imposibble that she will know.. T_T .. anyway keep your good work

That was really really good, keep up the good work

So cute!! loved it!! please if you get a chance check out mine. thanks!!
love always ~lilia~

I like how your ideas come across very clearly, and also the mood you create. :)

Beautiful write Miss Ann! Sad story it is but everything happens for a reason. I love the way you wrote this...it flowed wonderfully. It was just beautiful! Excellent write!!! :)

This piece is written just as if you had looked in my heart...so sad but at the same time so beautiful...Great Writing

That is an awesome poem but very sad! i like it though,

Brooke