Wonderful work, bravo!!!

Wow, wish I had the strength to give that poem to one person I know...sounds so true to what is happening in my life!

I really like the use of "if" alot. great words, very emotional. you've got talent well done x x x

Very well written. i think you hit on a sentiment that most people who have been in serious relationships can relate to. i certainly can.

This poem tell its on little story. its a beautiful, sad poem. its great. rebecca

This is a good poem. i like how u write.

That poem had brought many tears to my eyes. . .Excpecially the end. . .Well written poem. .. Keep writing I enjoy this peice of art.

Love that poem almost made mecry

I love this poem soo much!!!!!!!!!!!!