I can really relate!keep it up,5/5

Hmm, that word "Cause" caused me a lot of problems.. lol haha, umm yeah, it just didn't seem to flow well with this poem. Maybe try 'and' instead?.. hmm dont know.. whatever you like.

This poem is simple, yet very effective. Wording is excellent, and I like it from the beginning to the end.
I love your work, keep up!