by Lost & Delirious Sep 14, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
She stands there, |
by ashley
Your poems are amzing, you really get in depth about there feeling which make it better to read. thank you for my comment im looking foward to more of your poems |
by Robert
Its a beautiful poem. good job Gabriela! |
by Britney
Wow.. this poem is excellent. there are no words to describe.. All soo true.. I absolutely loved this one! No imporvements at all its so great! 10/5~ great job. xoxox |
by Carmen
I can totally relate to this poem, but the guy i like just broke up with his girl, so im in the rnning! yes! lo, anyways, awesome poem, but some places were hard to follow. 4/5 |
Aw.. its sad but sweet.. i love it great job! |