What a wonderful write this was!! It truly was a pleasure to read!
~Chelsey~

This is an awsome poem,it has such emotion and a nice flow and your right if you never say anything they will never know.its a great moral

I like it, well done. Skipped around through a few styles, don't know if that was intentional or not, but it fit.

Really good ! guess wot my name is gabriella - but my interent name is frankie and ur the first 'gabriela' i ever met! im 14/f/aus add me on msn if u've got it....starlett_21@hotmail.com

A beautiful poem!!! You've captured everything about unrequited love....go u!!! This poem really twisted my heart cuz i kno how this makes u feel like crap..........neva telling the one u love that you love em. Great job,luv jess xoxoxoxo

Very sad...love is such a valuable thing to waste.

-beth

Another amazing poem. It's short and simple conveying precious emotion. I enjoyed reading this.

Aw.. its sad but sweet.. i love it great job!

I can totally relate to this poem, but the guy i like just broke up with his girl, so im in the rnning! yes! lo, anyways, awesome poem, but some places were hard to follow. 4/5

Wow.. this poem is excellent. there are no words to describe.. All soo true.. I absolutely loved this one! No imporvements at all its so great! 10/5~ great job. xoxox

Its a beautiful poem. good job Gabriela!

Your poems are amzing, you really get in depth about there feeling which make it better to read. thank you for my comment im looking foward to more of your poems