I suggest if this is true you go tell him! Anyway, another really good job,I love these emotional poems you write, keep it up!

Aw...this is so sad...very nice flow....i think that the saddest part was the little note at the end....it was just....so sad....5/5

This one was good it flowed good had emotion to it

I know what that feels like and you did okay wording the emotions, i feel like you need to expand your vocabulary because honestly the words dont like entrap me like they should i think it could be made much more interesting by simply using a better vocab 4/5

Nice job, the first stanza had a nice flow. Try to keep the flow constant throughout the whole thing. Keep it up

*2nd one done*

Aw, your little note is sad, anyway i think you worded it well, again good job

Don't we all wish that this poem was true though? I mean, I know I wish it. I wish it all the time. Great poem yet again!

This poem seems wrapped-loosely i might say-around a very relatable idea... the flow was lacking a bit, there wasnt really a set rhyme scheme, which didnt help the rhythm..

When I enjoy it?

this line just seems out of place... the feeling is there, just through your expression it gets a little muddled..

When you and he kiss,
a better way to say would be when the two of you kiss, it flows a lil better and im not sure if your usage was grammatically correct.. so.. this was a good poem, but i think you could have expressed the idea more colorfully.. thats just my thoughts.. i know exactly the feeling you get, how it tears you up on the inside.. you say the poem's not true, but i wonder if his eyes are really on you(my fav line of the poem) anyway.. good job!

Wow amazing job been there felt that it sucks and it hurts keep up the good work 5.5