by Avrii Monrielle Sep 15, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A tear is the pen |
Hmm very good but how come only half of it rhymed? |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Wow. this poem is just beautiful. i loooove it. it seemed sorta random. like there is a connection between the first and last stanza..but it sorta changed. i dont know if you got that or not. IT'S THE MOST BEAUTIFUL OUT OF ALL YOUR WORK I'VE READ SO FAR! |
by Jenni Marie
Oh wow...this was excellent, I loved this. |
by katie
This is very powerful and I love it. Its really good!! |
by RetroRavey
I know the power of love and friendship... that poem kida hit me hard... but it was good. |