Wow....I'm speechless
It's beautiful..simply yet extravagently beautiful. I don't think I've ever read a poem this good. It pulled me in, then left me hopeful.

Great Job! 5.5.

Astonishing rainy....ur best yet, i couldn't beat you on that one ever, it was beautiful. Your poems give ppl hope, which one day could save thier life. Your everyones hero rainy:) oh ya, n congrats, you've made it to 100 poems! I'm so proud of you!!:)) Keep up this wonderful writing, LOL (lots of love)
wolfy

This was such a lovely poem with wonderful metaphors (like the pen being a tear). As the princess said, this is inspiring and it is very eomtive. Good job.

Whoa i loved it i'm speechless
u've got an amazing talent

pili

Hey it is me maya thanks for commenting means a lot to me and know i will be there for you to and is there a way we can talk with both of us on line????? well i'll be your friend to i am fighting with depression but i am getting better

Beautiful! 5/5

You are an artist of the pen... at such an age your work speaks for you... Continue to share your work.

You do with words what most artists could never do with pictures and paint! I can't believe you're only 12! You are brilliant and you should never ever stop writing! I love your poetry!

Thats great :) I love it..
I found your poems through a post you made in discussions..

Amazing poem !!

xxx

This is such a wonderful poem. Very unique and well written. Thank for sharing. Keep it up ^_^.

Woah that was WAY good...it had so much emmotion and stuff...5/5 4 sure!!!

~*Who Cares?*~

Whoa... very sweet. all people should really see that friends can help the pain and tears lessen. great poem!
5/5

Lay ovlay ouyay!
Aishiteru!
Te amo!

I hope 'lessen' is a word. if not you know what i mean. lol

This is very uplifting, I love it when people try and use their pain, and the pain they know everyone else is feeling to send a message to someone. My favorite stanza would be :
:But this hand
Is offered to you by me
So you can live another day
Nothing's ever what it seems"

good job.

Hey its angel you commented on my poem kids of today...thank you...and dnt worry bout wat yo parents think of you..i know they play a big part in your life..but you know that you wont be able to change unless you want to.. and its up to you if want to be skinny or over weight...maybe try excercising aswell...i mean i can sumtimes love my food aswell...but then i'll go to the beach after wards n just relax..it helps...n ur mum shud kno way better than to call you fat..that is child abuse too..n child abuse ignored is child abuse!!...i feel for you really i do..n this may not even help you..but i will listen if you speak up...and stand up for yourself..pray to God and He will help you...wether or not your a christian he will help..His the only person you can really count on anyways..nn i hope ive helped you beautiful!!...mwah mwah!! lov ya
IN Christ
-angel-

Wow this is great. really nicely written, the rhythm and rhyme varies, but it flows really nicely. thankyou for the comment, very much appreciated.
polly X

Speachless. You can write!

Excellent. This was well done. Some word problems in the middle but who cares when the entire piece makes its point clearly...this was one of the most interesting and stunning I've seen. A bit more happy than expected as well. Great flow and excellent content. Nice job.
~Faith

Oh, wow! **5/5** sweetie! And happy teenager-hood! Keep up the great work.

LOVE
Lolli.xx