Hi, congrats on gettin 1st in my contest. anyway, gr8 poem, loved the details and everything, very awesum! 5/5
~*Who Cares?*~

Woww.. that was just so beautiful! so so beautiful! the flow was good and there was so much emotion in it! 5/5

LUSH POEM ITS RELLI GD ( IM SAD NOW!! :'( LOL
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Definately my fav poem
that ive read so far
5/5
no question about it
keeep this stuff up
~Emma

Wow so beautiful and very well written i love it thanks for letting me read it and thanks for the comment!

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

Laura

Beautiful.....

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

Laura

Hey thanks for the comment on my poem. I loved this. Ironically writing about it is actually helping me not do it. i know that makes no sense. but i guess this helps me get it out. and the more open i am about how i feel in my poems the less the intensity is to take actions I know i'l regret.

but listen thanks again. i'd love to hear what you think of my poems though they arent all about that.
lol
:)

xoxo

I know the power of love and friendship... that poem kida hit me hard... but it was good.

Rave!

This is very powerful and I love it. Its really good!!
~KaTiE

Oh wow...this was excellent, I loved this.
I thought the flow and rhyme scheme worked really well together, the imagery used was amazing and I loved the wording.
A pleasure to read.

Wow. this poem is just beautiful. i loooove it. it seemed sorta random. like there is a connection between the first and last stanza..but it sorta changed. i dont know if you got that or not. IT'S THE MOST BEAUTIFUL OUT OF ALL YOUR WORK I'VE READ SO FAR!

Hmm very good but how come only half of it rhymed?

5/5