Hatred awakes.
Concentrations breaks.
Corruption inside.
Everything good has died.
Nothing left but black.
Nothing good in me will ever come back.
Broken into nothing.
Darkness is what time will bring.
You test my patience.
Now you can see my hatred.
Your all to blame for this.
And now I realize this feeling is total bliss.
My anger festers and breathes.
Along with the burning it seethes.
I can see all your lies.
They all smile in your eyes.
Laughing in my face.
Pointing at me with disgrace.
Talk behind my back.
Stand there and watch everything die and go black.
Ever since you started my life has been underlined.
You live all your lives blind.
Living in doubt.
Now I'm Freaking out...
It was a very heartfelt poem. I enjoyed reading it. I like how you got it all to rhyme, everytime i try and do that it never works. but what a great peom.
